directions: imagine that a classmate needs your help revising the sentences that follow. read the sentences…

directions: imagine that a classmate needs your help revising the sentences that follow. read the sentences, and then indicate which comment would best help the classmate revise the work.\nhave you ever wondered how massive dinosaur skeletons are moved from place to place? recently, a museum in montana tried to move a skeleton of a tyrannosaurus rex to washington, d.c. heres how it was done: first, the bones were catalogued and individually wrapped. second, the bones were packed inside crates. third, the crates were loaded onto a truck that was kept at a precise temperature.\nwhich comment would best help the author of these sentences revise the work?\nreaders might want more specific information: how big are the bones? what packing materials are used? how big is the truck?\nyou have some capitalization errors that you should fix.\nyour teacher is going to love this!

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