the following introduction is from a previous draft of monicas personal essay. which sentence could she a…

the following introduction is from a previous draft of monicas personal essay. which sentence could she a help her engage her audiences attention? growing up, i was always quiet. i preferred reading books and writing furiously in my notebook over joinin talking loudly at family parties. people would always comment on how quiet i was and i started to think tha high school, though, i found an activity that allowed me to use my quieter skills. soon i learned that there w a. my weakness has always been my quiet personality. b. my personality is way different from the rest of my familys. c. do you think journalists are loud people or quiet people like me? d. do you ever feel like you are the only person who thinks the way you do?

the following introduction is from a previous draft of monicas personal essay. which sentence could she a help her engage her audiences attention? growing up, i was always quiet. i preferred reading books and writing furiously in my notebook over joinin talking loudly at family parties. people would always comment on how quiet i was and i started to think tha high school, though, i found an activity that allowed me to use my quieter skills. soon i learned that there w a. my weakness has always been my quiet personality. b. my personality is way different from the rest of my familys. c. do you think journalists are loud people or quiet people like me? d. do you ever feel like you are the only person who thinks the way you do?

Answer

Brief Explanations:

  • Option A: Just states a weakness (quiet personality) without engaging the audience.
  • Option B: Compares personality with family but not engaging.
  • Option C: Asks a question about journalists (relates to the author's later activity as a journalist perhaps) and engages the reader by making them think.
  • Option D: Asks a general question about feeling alone in thinking but not as relevant to the context of the essay (which is about finding an activity using quieter skills, likely journalism as per the context).

Answer:

C. Do you think journalists are loud people or quiet people like me?