which of the following sentences is most appr...
which of the following sentences is most appropriate for written communication at work or with a customer? dude, i just know our new product will make you lol when i demonstrate it for you!! :) i’ll be happy to dog - and - pony a demo of our new xvg just as soon as we can get a space on the corpcal. i cannot tell you how pleased i will be to hear from you, at any time that you choose to contact me, if you would like to spend any amount of time at our office or at your workplace viewing a thrilling demonstration of our spectacular new product. please contact me when you’re ready for a demonstration of our new product.
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# Brief Explanations:
The first two sentences use very informal language ("Dude", "LOL", "dog - and - pony"). The third sentence is overly wordy and convoluted. The fourth sentence is clear, concise, and appropriate for a professional written communication with a customer or at work.
# Answer:
Please contact me when you're ready for a demonstration of our new product.