which of the following sentences is the best revision for reducing wordiness? original: at this moment in…

which of the following sentences is the best revision for reducing wordiness? original: at this moment in time, i am not feeling very well at all. unfortunately, i have to say i am not feeling well right now. currently, if you asked, i would say i am not feeling well. right now, i am not feeling well. at this time, i am not feeling my best at all. question 11 (1.5 points) which sentence comes across as most effective for being as concise and as clear as possible? she took part in a marathon to support the charity. she got involved in a marathon for charity. she participated in a marathon for charity. she was involved in supporting a charity by participating in a marathon.

which of the following sentences is the best revision for reducing wordiness? original: at this moment in time, i am not feeling very well at all. unfortunately, i have to say i am not feeling well right now. currently, if you asked, i would say i am not feeling well. right now, i am not feeling well. at this time, i am not feeling my best at all. question 11 (1.5 points) which sentence comes across as most effective for being as concise and as clear as possible? she took part in a marathon to support the charity. she got involved in a marathon for charity. she participated in a marathon for charity. she was involved in supporting a charity by participating in a marathon.

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For the first question, the original sentence "At this moment in time, I am not feeling very well at all" has wordy phrases. "At this moment in time" can be simplified. "Right now, I am not feeling well" is the most concise as it cuts out unnecessary words like "very" (implied by "not feeling well") and uses a simple time - reference "right now". For the second question, "She took part in a marathon to support the charity" is more concise. "Got involved in" is a bit less direct than "took part in". "Participated in" is also correct but "took part in" is more commonly used in this context. The last option "She was involved in supporting a charity by participating in a marathon" is the most wordy.

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First question: Right now, I am not feeling well. Second question: She took part in a marathon to support the charity.