highlight the vague word or phrase in the thesis statement below. all-girls schools should hire only female…
highlight the vague word or phrase in the thesis statement below. all-girls schools should hire only female people.
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Brief Explanations:
The phrase "female people" is vague because "female" already implies a person (as "people" is used here redundantly and the phrasing is awkward; typically, we use "females" or "female staff/teachers" etc. for clarity, and "female people" is an unclear and wordy way to refer to women).
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female people