highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy. guys fascination with clarisse is…
highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy. guys fascination with clarisse is increased by her death.
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The phrase "is increased by" can be more concisely written. A more direct way to say it could be "grows after" or similar. This makes the original phrase wordy.
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is increased by