highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy.\nhumans are more of a threat to nemo…
highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy.\nhumans are more of a threat to nemo than other creatures of the sea.
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Brief Explanations:
The phrase "more of a" is unnecessary and makes the sentence wordy. The sentence could be simplified to "Humans are a greater threat to Nemo than other creatures of the sea."
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more of a