highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy. the most powerful lesson that is learned…
highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy. the most powerful lesson that is learned by simba is to value family.
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Brief Explanations:
The phrase "that is learned by" is unnecessary as the passive - voice construction can be made more concise. The subject "Simba" and the action "learned" can be re - structured to be more direct.
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that is learned by