identifying clear and concise writing\nread each statement and decide whether it is clear and concise or…

identifying clear and concise writing\nread each statement and decide whether it is clear and concise or wordy and unclear.\nthe community center is good for everyone to do all kinds of fun things when they want.\nthe proposed program will give every student in the county access to tutoring services.\ninstalling recycle bins at key points around the city will make recycling easier for our residents.\nmany people have said there are not enough security guards at the mall, so the mall is unsafe and dangerous, and people dont want to shop there.

identifying clear and concise writing\nread each statement and decide whether it is clear and concise or wordy and unclear.\nthe community center is good for everyone to do all kinds of fun things when they want.\nthe proposed program will give every student in the county access to tutoring services.\ninstalling recycle bins at key points around the city will make recycling easier for our residents.\nmany people have said there are not enough security guards at the mall, so the mall is unsafe and dangerous, and people dont want to shop there.

Answer

Brief Explanations:

  1. The first statement "The community center is good for everyone to do all kinds of fun things when they want" is wordy and unclear as it could be more direct.
  2. The second statement "The proposed program will give every student in the county access to tutoring services" is clear and concise as it directly states the program's benefit.
  3. The third statement "Installing recycle bins at key points around the city will make recycling easier for our residents" is clear and concise, simply explaining the action - result relationship.
  4. The fourth statement "Many people have said there are not enough security guards at the mall, so the mall is unsafe and dangerous, and people don't want to shop there" is wordy and unclear, with redundant words like "unsafe and dangerous".

Answer:

  1. Wordy and unclear
  2. Clear and concise
  3. Clear and concise
  4. Wordy and unclear