jackie robinson is the greatest athlete america has ever known. an athlete has to be talented if he or she…

jackie robinson is the greatest athlete america has ever known. an athlete has to be talented if he or she wants to be a legend, and robinson won many awards for his talent. not only did he break the color barrier in baseball, he was also an incredible diplomat, speaker, and advocate for civil rights. compare your revisions to the model paragraph by completing the following sentence. i made all of the same revisions. which of the following revisions did you include while rewriting the passage? check any of the boxes that apply. i removed the dangling preposition. i removed the gendered pronoun. i made the listed items parallel. i added the oxford comma. i added sentence variety. i changed the passive voice to active voice. done complete

jackie robinson is the greatest athlete america has ever known. an athlete has to be talented if he or she wants to be a legend, and robinson won many awards for his talent. not only did he break the color barrier in baseball, he was also an incredible diplomat, speaker, and advocate for civil rights. compare your revisions to the model paragraph by completing the following sentence. i made all of the same revisions. which of the following revisions did you include while rewriting the passage? check any of the boxes that apply. i removed the dangling preposition. i removed the gendered pronoun. i made the listed items parallel. i added the oxford comma. i added sentence variety. i changed the passive voice to active voice. done complete

Answer

Brief Explanations:

  1. There is no dangling preposition in the original passage, so this revision was not made.
  2. The original passage uses "he or she" which is a non - gendered way of referring to an athlete, so no need to remove a gendered pronoun.
  3. The listed items "diplomat, speaker, and advocate" are already parallel.
  4. The Oxford comma is used in "diplomat, speaker, and advocate", but there's no indication it was added during revision as it was already there.
  5. There is no obvious lack of sentence variety in the original passage to suggest this was a revision.
  6. The passage is in active voice already, so no change from passive to active voice was made.

Answer:

None of the above.