the library visit\nthe library was quiet. it was a strange kind of quiet. ellie walked through the big…

the library visit\nthe library was quiet. it was a strange kind of quiet. ellie walked through the big wooden doors and looked around. the room felt different than a normal library, but i couldnt figure out why. she walked past the rows of bookshelves. ellie thought the shelves were taller than she expected. they seemed to go on forever. i dont know how she wasnt nervous. the air was cool, and ellie shivered.\nshe reached the middle of the library and stopped at a table. there was an old book lying open, and it looked like no one had touched it in years. ellie flipped through the pages. the words didnt make sense to her. they were written in some kind of strange language, and the letters didnt look familiar. i thought maybe they were from a secret code, but ellie didnt say anything about it. the book had a gold cover, and ellie noticed there was a faint glow coming from it. she picked it up, and the glow disappeared. it was kind of weird.\nthere was a loud creak as ellie took a step toward the staircase, but she didnt stop. i climbed the stairs slowly. when she got to the top, there was nothing there. just a blank wall. she turned back toward the stairs, and the light in the library flickered. ellie hurried back down, and i took the book starting to get worried. she decided to leave the book on the table and walked back toward the door\n\n1. which revision best fixes the inconsistent point of view in this passage?\nadd more sentences using first - person point of view\nleave the point of view as it is to keep variety\nchange all first - person sentences to third - person\nchange ellies name to \i\ throughout the passage

the library visit\nthe library was quiet. it was a strange kind of quiet. ellie walked through the big wooden doors and looked around. the room felt different than a normal library, but i couldnt figure out why. she walked past the rows of bookshelves. ellie thought the shelves were taller than she expected. they seemed to go on forever. i dont know how she wasnt nervous. the air was cool, and ellie shivered.\nshe reached the middle of the library and stopped at a table. there was an old book lying open, and it looked like no one had touched it in years. ellie flipped through the pages. the words didnt make sense to her. they were written in some kind of strange language, and the letters didnt look familiar. i thought maybe they were from a secret code, but ellie didnt say anything about it. the book had a gold cover, and ellie noticed there was a faint glow coming from it. she picked it up, and the glow disappeared. it was kind of weird.\nthere was a loud creak as ellie took a step toward the staircase, but she didnt stop. i climbed the stairs slowly. when she got to the top, there was nothing there. just a blank wall. she turned back toward the stairs, and the light in the library flickered. ellie hurried back down, and i took the book starting to get worried. she decided to leave the book on the table and walked back toward the door\n\n1. which revision best fixes the inconsistent point of view in this passage?\nadd more sentences using first - person point of view\nleave the point of view as it is to keep variety\nchange all first - person sentences to third - person\nchange ellies name to \i\ throughout the passage

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Brief Explanations:

The passage has inconsistent point - of - view. Some sentences are in third - person (e.g., "She walked past the rows of bookshelves") and some are in first - person (e.g., "I don't know how she wasn't nervous"). Changing all first - person sentences to third - person would fix this inconsistency.

Answer:

Change all first - person sentences to third - person.