like sports and pride traditions of the school. some if not most students wear their schools merchandise…

like sports and pride traditions of the school. some if not most students wear their schools merchandise including shirts, hats, etc. as it is, especially athletes. they want to represent what school they attend and what sports they mainly play. for instance, at my school i see a lot of people wearing the school baseball caps or the school football shirts. a great place to purchase school attire is through the schools athletic booster club. in the text, the author states, hats can show school pride. many schools have a blanket ban on hats. this is because its easier to keep inappropriate slogans or logos off school premises that way versus trying to regulate whats appropriate, as this may come with some first amendment debates. one compromise would be to permit hats that have the schools logo. this way, students promote school spirit while enjoying the benefits of wearing hats. this excerpt from the wearing hats indoors at school proves that hats could actually benefit the school by students wearing school hats that represent them.\n4 as shown, hats should be able to be worn in school. the reason being is because it could benefit students by allowing them to express themselves and it could also help students show school pride. hopefully, these compelling reasons have convinced people such as teachers, administrations, and district officials that hats should be able to be worn in school.\n5. what is wrong with this essay?\na. the heading is not in mla format\nb. the first letter of each major word in the title should be capitalized\nc. the paragraphs should not be indented\nd. the essay is missing a conclusion\n6. the underlined portion of this essay is the...\na. title\nb. hook\nc. thesis statement\nd. topic sentence

like sports and pride traditions of the school. some if not most students wear their schools merchandise including shirts, hats, etc. as it is, especially athletes. they want to represent what school they attend and what sports they mainly play. for instance, at my school i see a lot of people wearing the school baseball caps or the school football shirts. a great place to purchase school attire is through the schools athletic booster club. in the text, the author states, hats can show school pride. many schools have a blanket ban on hats. this is because its easier to keep inappropriate slogans or logos off school premises that way versus trying to regulate whats appropriate, as this may come with some first amendment debates. one compromise would be to permit hats that have the schools logo. this way, students promote school spirit while enjoying the benefits of wearing hats. this excerpt from the wearing hats indoors at school proves that hats could actually benefit the school by students wearing school hats that represent them.\n4 as shown, hats should be able to be worn in school. the reason being is because it could benefit students by allowing them to express themselves and it could also help students show school pride. hopefully, these compelling reasons have convinced people such as teachers, administrations, and district officials that hats should be able to be worn in school.\n5. what is wrong with this essay?\na. the heading is not in mla format\nb. the first letter of each major word in the title should be capitalized\nc. the paragraphs should not be indented\nd. the essay is missing a conclusion\n6. the underlined portion of this essay is the...\na. title\nb. hook\nc. thesis statement\nd. topic sentence

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Brief Explanations:

For question 5:

  • In MLA format, paragraphs are indented. So option C is incorrect.
  • The first letter of each major word in the title should be capitalized. So option B is correct.
  • There is no indication that the heading is not in MLA format (no heading shown clearly). So option A is incorrect.
  • The text seems to be an excerpt, not necessarily missing a conclusion. So option D is incorrect.

For question 6:

  • The thesis statement presents the main argument of the essay. The underlined portion "As shown, hats should be able to be worn in school. The reason being is because it could benefit students by allowing them to express themselves and it could also help students show school pride" is the main argument.
  • A hook is an engaging opening. A title is the name of the essay. A topic sentence introduces a paragraph's topic.

Answer:

  1. B. the first letter of each major word in the title should be capitalized
  2. C. thesis statement