the lion was prowling around.\nthe lion hunted for dinner.\nrevise your work. try putting the -ing phrase at…

the lion was prowling around.\nthe lion hunted for dinner.\nrevise your work. try putting the -ing phrase at the beginning of the sentence. use the hint as an example.\nthe lion was hunted for dinner, was prowling around\nhint\nput a phrase that begins with an -ed word or an -ing word right before the person or thing the phrase is describing. use a comma!

the lion was prowling around.\nthe lion hunted for dinner.\nrevise your work. try putting the -ing phrase at the beginning of the sentence. use the hint as an example.\nthe lion was hunted for dinner, was prowling around\nhint\nput a phrase that begins with an -ed word or an -ing word right before the person or thing the phrase is describing. use a comma!

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Brief Explanations:

To revise the sentences following the hint, we take the -ing phrase "Prowling around" (from "The lion was prowling around") and place it at the beginning of the combined sentence, then add a comma and the rest of the sentence with the lion as the subject. The correct revised sentence should be "Prowling around, the lion hunted for dinner." The original response had incorrect structure and meaning (it implied the lion was hunted, which is wrong).

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Prowling around, the lion hunted for dinner.