liven your readers by rewriting boring, breat...
liven your readers by rewriting boring, breathless lists and replacing \and\s with commas. dont forget to leave the last \and\ so the sentence still makes sense. 1. i will need a towel and shorts and a hat and goggles for my vacation. 2. under the sofa, i found an apple and twenty cents and a ticket and a brush. 3. we saw lions and bears and zebras and tigers and snakes at the zoo. 4. winter is cold and dark and wet and long and miserable. 5. the bike was new and red and shiny and fast. 6. fruit is healthy and sweet and colorful and tasty. 7. her children were named robbie and deena and david and simon and tim. 8. the store sold burritos and vegetables and soda.
Answer
# Brief Explanations:
For each sentence, replace all "and"s except the last one with commas to make a list - like structure more readable.
# Answer:
1. I will need a towel, shorts, a hat and goggles for my vacation.
2. Under the sofa, I found an apple, twenty cents, a ticket and a brush.
3. We saw lions, bears, zebras, tigers and snakes at the zoo.
4. Winter is cold, dark, wet, long and miserable.
5. The bike was new, red, shiny and fast.
6. Fruit is healthy, sweet, colorful and tasty.
7. Her children were named Robbie, Deena, David, Simon and Tim.
8. The store sold burritos, vegetables and soda.