michael submitted a narrative essay about a trip to the grand canyon. his teacher explained the paper had a…

michael submitted a narrative essay about a trip to the grand canyon. his teacher explained the paper had a problem with conventions. how should he revise it? he should restructure the paper by moving paragraphs. he should make the tone of the paper much more formal. he should correct any mistakes in spelling or grammar. he should add stronger details and more precise, colorful language.

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