name: marissa hernandez 10/21/15 p1 @ copyright 2019 lmb literacy\nhaunted houses\ni have never been one two…

name: marissa hernandez 10/21/15 p1 @ copyright 2019 lmb literacy\nhaunted houses\ni have never been one two enjoy haunted houses. i dont quite understand why people like to be scared and think that it be fun my best friend ask me every year on halloween to go to a haunted house with her since i am embarrassing to admit that i am scared, i come up with a different excuse each time this year im going to tell the truth and finally say, i just dont like haunted houses\nrewrite the paragraph correctly on the lines below.

name: marissa hernandez 10/21/15 p1 @ copyright 2019 lmb literacy\nhaunted houses\ni have never been one two enjoy haunted houses. i dont quite understand why people like to be scared and think that it be fun my best friend ask me every year on halloween to go to a haunted house with her since i am embarrassing to admit that i am scared, i come up with a different excuse each time this year im going to tell the truth and finally say, i just dont like haunted houses\nrewrite the paragraph correctly on the lines below.

Answer

Brief Explanations:

  • Capitalization: Proper nouns like "Halloween" and the start of sentences should be capitalized.
  • Subject - Verb Agreement: "My best friend asks" (third - person singular).
  • Punctuation: Add commas after introductory clauses (e.g., "Since I am embarrassed to admit that I am scared,").
  • Word Choice: "embarrassed" instead of "embarrassing" (the person is embarrassed, not the situation of admitting is embarrassing).
  • Sentence Structure: Combine or re - structure sentences for better flow.

Answer:

I have never been one to enjoy Haunted Houses. I don't quite understand why people like to be scared and think that it is fun. My best friend asks me every year on Halloween to go to a haunted house with her. Since I am embarrassed to admit that I am scared, I come up with a different excuse each time. This year I'm going to tell the truth and finally say, I just don't like haunted houses.