(1) producers of reality shows are being smart, not unethical, when they give their \actors\ scripts to…

(1) producers of reality shows are being smart, not unethical, when they give their \actors\ scripts to follow. (2) if producers had to follow everyone around waiting for an exciting event to occur, they would never make their deadlines to produce the episodes. (3) therefore, scripted reality shows reflect efficient planning, not sheer deceit. (4) furthermore, the scripts do not change the fact that the shows are based on the real lives of the \actors.\ (5) for example, if a reality show were about an interior decorator, the producer would never give the decorator a script related to running a restaurant. (6) the producer would, of course, always create scripts that related to decorating. which revision would best improve the connections between ideas and the flow of the paragraph? adding a fact to improve the logic of sentence 2 moving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph adding a transitional phrase to sentence 4 using an analogy to describe a restaurant in sentence 5

(1) producers of reality shows are being smart, not unethical, when they give their \actors\ scripts to follow. (2) if producers had to follow everyone around waiting for an exciting event to occur, they would never make their deadlines to produce the episodes. (3) therefore, scripted reality shows reflect efficient planning, not sheer deceit. (4) furthermore, the scripts do not change the fact that the shows are based on the real lives of the \actors.\ (5) for example, if a reality show were about an interior decorator, the producer would never give the decorator a script related to running a restaurant. (6) the producer would, of course, always create scripts that related to decorating. which revision would best improve the connections between ideas and the flow of the paragraph? adding a fact to improve the logic of sentence 2 moving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph adding a transitional phrase to sentence 4 using an analogy to describe a restaurant in sentence 5

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La adición de una frase transitiva en la oración 4 mejoraría la conexión entre las ideas y el flujo del párrafo. Las frases transitivas ayudan a crear una transición lógica entre oraciones y secciones de un texto.

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C. adding a transitional phrase to sentence 4