question. savannah wrote this essay for a des...
question. savannah wrote this essay for a descriptive writing assignment in her english class. read savannah’s essay and look for corrections she should make. then answer the questions that follow. (1) the acrid scent of burning firewood wafts through the crisp night air. (2) suddenly being transported back to childhood as a memory plays in my mind like a movie. (3) my dad, brothers, and i are lounging around a campfire, spearing marshmallows with sticks and holding them over the open flames. (4) my marshmallow catches fire, and i turn it slowly, letting it brown on all sides before blowing it out. (5) i pull gently at its crisp use “smells like a memory” to answer questions 5 - 9. what change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 2? a change being to i am b insert a comma after childhood c change plays to playing d sentence 2 should not be changed.