question. savannah wrote this essay for a des...
question. savannah wrote this essay for a descriptive writing assignment in her english class. read savannah’s essay and look for corrections she should make. then answer the questions that follow. my mind like a movie. (3) my dad, brothers, and i are lounging around a campfire, spearing marshmallows with sticks and holding them over the open flames. (4) my marshmallow catches fire, and i turn it slowly, letting it brown on all sides before blowing it out. (5) i pull gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness teases my nostrils. (6) i wait impatiently for it to cool enough to put in my mouth. what is the correct way to write sentence 5? a i pull gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness that teases my nostrils. b as i pull gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness teases my nostrils. c pulling gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness teasing my nostrils. d when i pull gently at its crisp brown shell, and the aroma of its gooey sweetness teasing my nostrils.