read the following excerpt from a student essay. how can the writer best improve his or her word choice? i…

read the following excerpt from a student essay. how can the writer best improve his or her word choice? i saw a movie called blob invasion. it was really good. it was about a weird guy who was into science. he worked on bugs and small animals. he made a machine that did things to the bugs and the animals. they became big weird things. one day he transformed himself by accident. he became a big blob! he went around doing bad things to the city. in the end, a boy figured out how to change the blob back into a man. i would recommend this movie to everyone who likes fun science movies. by using more specific language by reducing repetitive language

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