read the following excerpt from a student essay. how can the writer best improve his or her organization? i…

read the following excerpt from a student essay. how can the writer best improve his or her organization? i discovered my passion shortly after my freshman year. that summer, at my parents suggestion, i attended a weeklong seminar sponsored by a local university. although i was nervous about being the only high school student, i stretched myself and learned a lot. through the seminar, i mastered the basics of reporting and feature writing. the following summer, i took a creative writing workshop and completed several short stories. in my schools creative writing class this year, i am sharing my stories with others and receiving helpful critiques to improve my craft. by reordering sentences to keep related ideas together by putting the ideas in chronological order by clearly stating the main idea

read the following excerpt from a student essay. how can the writer best improve his or her organization? i discovered my passion shortly after my freshman year. that summer, at my parents suggestion, i attended a weeklong seminar sponsored by a local university. although i was nervous about being the only high school student, i stretched myself and learned a lot. through the seminar, i mastered the basics of reporting and feature writing. the following summer, i took a creative writing workshop and completed several short stories. in my schools creative writing class this year, i am sharing my stories with others and receiving helpful critiques to improve my craft. by reordering sentences to keep related ideas together by putting the ideas in chronological order by clearly stating the main idea

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The passage is a narrative of the writer's journey in writing but lacks a clear - stated main idea. Reordering sentences or putting ideas in chronological order is not the main issue. Clearly stating what the overall point about their writing passion journey is would improve organization.

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by clearly stating the main idea