read the following paragraph.\nobviously, we all know about american football and baseball. however, there…

read the following paragraph.\nobviously, we all know about american football and baseball. however, there are other sports that most americans never think about, let alone participate in. soccer is played all over the world. it is loved by hundreds of millions of people across all continents. cricket is also quite popular. it is played in countries like england but also in pakistan and india. it is the second most popular sport in the world. the third most popular sport in the world is field hockey. it is played by both male and female athletes in many places.\nwhich revision would make this paragraph suitable for a presentation?\ninserting stronger verbs and a more active voice\nmaking sentences longer and more meaningful\nincluding personal and second - person pronouns\nrevising the text with more formal language

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