read the following text from a student essay. how can the writer best improve his or her word choice? if i…
read the following text from a student essay. how can the writer best improve his or her word choice? if i could invent something, i would create a really nice bicycle. my bike would have a good seat and great tires so that i could ride it anywhere. it would also have a bell and special pockets for carrying things. a special top would be wonderful, so i could ride it in the rain but also enjoy the sun. i would choose a fun color to reflect my personality. inventing a new bike would be cool. by reducing repetitive language by using more specific language