read the model sentence from beth reviss across the universe. the clatter of his steps across the metal…

read the model sentence from beth reviss across the universe. the clatter of his steps across the metal floor—uneven from his limp—is sound filling the silence. © 2011 beth revis. use the words and phrases to create a new sentence that matches the model. —were a visible sign the trickles of sweat on his face —aglitter in the blinding sun indicating his distress.
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Brief Explanations:
The model sentence has a main - clause structure with an appositive phrase set off by dashes. We arrange the given phrases in a similar structure. The main subject is "The trickles of sweat on his face", the appositive phrase is "—aglitter in the blinding sun—" and the predicate part is "were a visible sign indicating his distress".
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The trickles of sweat on his face—aglitter in the blinding sun—were a visible sign indicating his distress.