read the paragraph.\ndriving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. we planned on leaving…

read the paragraph.\ndriving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. we planned on leaving at 5:30 p.m., which was unfortunately during rush hour. the traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be stuck. we decided to consult a map in an attempt to find an alternative route.\nwhich sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph?\n○ sentence 1\n○ sentence 2\n○ sentence 3\n○ sentence 4

read the paragraph.\ndriving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. we planned on leaving at 5:30 p.m., which was unfortunately during rush hour. the traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be stuck. we decided to consult a map in an attempt to find an alternative route.\nwhich sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph?\n○ sentence 1\n○ sentence 2\n○ sentence 3\n○ sentence 4

Answer

Brief Explanations:

The first - sentence uses "troublesome, difficult situation" which is redundant. Rewriting it could improve clarity.

Answer:

sentence 1