read the paragraph. driving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. we planned on leaving…

read the paragraph. driving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. we planned on leaving at 5:30 p.m., which was unfortunately during rush hour. the traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be stuck. we decided to consult a map in an attempt to find an alternative route. which sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph? o sentence 1 o sentence 2 o sentence 3 o sentence 4

read the paragraph. driving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. we planned on leaving at 5:30 p.m., which was unfortunately during rush hour. the traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be stuck. we decided to consult a map in an attempt to find an alternative route. which sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph? o sentence 1 o sentence 2 o sentence 3 o sentence 4

Answer

Brief Explanations:

The first - sentence uses "troublesome, difficult situation" which is redundant and unclear. Rewriting it could improve clarity.

Answer:

A. sentence 1