read the paragraph.\ndriving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. we planned on leaving…

read the paragraph.\ndriving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. we planned on leaving at 5:30 p.m., which was unfortunately during rush hour. the traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be stuck. we decided to consult a map in an attempt to find an alternative route.\nwhich sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph?\no sentence 1\no sentence 2\no sentence 3\no sentence 4

read the paragraph.\ndriving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. we planned on leaving at 5:30 p.m., which was unfortunately during rush hour. the traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be stuck. we decided to consult a map in an attempt to find an alternative route.\nwhich sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph?\no sentence 1\no sentence 2\no sentence 3\no sentence 4

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Brief Explanations:

The first - sentence uses two similar adjectives ('troublesome' and 'difficult') which makes it wordy and less clear. Rewriting it could improve clarity.

Answer:

sentence 1