7. read the paragraph from a students persona...
7. read the paragraph from a students personal narrative. (1) for my tenth birthday, my parents gave me a magic set. (2) to my dismay, i fumbled in my nervousness, and the secrets of my best tricks were revealed! (3) i did little during the next week besides practice my magic tricks, perfecting each hand movement. (4) when i felt ready to display my new skills for my family, i announced a performance after dinner. which revision correctly organizes the paragraph? (10 points) move sentence 2 after sentence 4. move sentence 3 after sentence 1. move sentence 3 after sentence 4. move sentence 4 after sentence 1.
Answer
# Brief Explanations:
The narrative should first introduce the gift (sentence 1), then the practice (sentence 3) that follows the initial set - back (sentence 2), and finally the announcement of the performance (sentence 4). Moving sentence 3 after sentence 1 creates a more logical sequence as it shows the immediate action after getting the gift.
# Answer:
Move sentence 3 after sentence 1.