read the passage from an argumentative essay.\nits no wonder students grades drop when they enter high…

read the passage from an argumentative essay.\nits no wonder students grades drop when they enter high school. (2) they are suffering various effects of sleep deprivation. (3) they cannot focus, they fall asleep in class, and they often forget what they have read or heard. (4) they may even hallucinate.\nhow should sentence 3 be revised to clarify relationships among ideas?\nby connecting it to sentence 2 with \so\\nby connecting it to sentence 4 with \and\\nby adding \in addition\ to the beginning of the sentence\nby adding \specifically\ to the beginning of the sentence

read the passage from an argumentative essay.\nits no wonder students grades drop when they enter high school. (2) they are suffering various effects of sleep deprivation. (3) they cannot focus, they fall asleep in class, and they often forget what they have read or heard. (4) they may even hallucinate.\nhow should sentence 3 be revised to clarify relationships among ideas?\nby connecting it to sentence 2 with \so\\nby connecting it to sentence 4 with \and\\nby adding \in addition\ to the beginning of the sentence\nby adding \specifically\ to the beginning of the sentence

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Brief Explanations:

Sentence 3 lists specific effects (can't focus, fall asleep in class, forget) of the "various effects" mentioned in sentence 2. "Specifically" is a transition that shows a more detailed elaboration of the general statement in sentence 2. "So" would imply a cause - effect in a more direct result way (not the case here as sentence 3 is elaboration). "And" connecting to sentence 4 would not clarify the relationship with sentence 2. "In addition" would imply adding another separate point rather than elaborating on the previous one.

Answer:

by adding "Specifically" to the beginning of the sentence