2. read the sentence. that was the first competition in which i didnt win an award i was still proud of my…

2. read the sentence. that was the first competition in which i didnt win an award i was still proud of my work how should the run - on sentence be rewritten? that was the first competition in which i didnt win an award i was still proud of my work that was the first competition in which i didnt win an award, nor i was still proud of my work that was the first competition in which i didnt win an award, because i was still proud of my work that was the first competition in which i didnt win an award, sometimes i was still proud of my work

2. read the sentence. that was the first competition in which i didnt win an award i was still proud of my work how should the run - on sentence be rewritten? that was the first competition in which i didnt win an award i was still proud of my work that was the first competition in which i didnt win an award, nor i was still proud of my work that was the first competition in which i didnt win an award, because i was still proud of my work that was the first competition in which i didnt win an award, sometimes i was still proud of my work

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Brief Explanations:

A run - on sentence occurs when two independent clauses are improperly joined. The original sentence "That was the first competition in which I didn't win an award I was still proud of my work" is a run - on. We can use a semicolon to separate the two independent clauses as it shows a relationship between them (contrast in this case).

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That was the first competition in which I didn't win an award; I was still proud of my work.