read the sentence.\ni told them how surprised and excited i was to have my painting selected, especially…

read the sentence.\ni told them how surprised and excited i was to have my painting selected, especially since id felt so incompetent at the beginning and i knew the competition was so ruthless.\nwhich revision best uses dialogue to reveal more about the character?\n○ \it was such a big surprise.\ i told them. \im excited that my painting was selected!\ i had felt so incompetent at the beginning, feeling unqualified next to such ruthless competition.\n○ i told them truthfully that i was surprised to be chosen. the competition was ruthless, so very fierce. i felt so incompetent at the beginning. its really exciting to have my painting selected.\n○ \im in!\ i exclaimed, voice cracking with emotion. \my painting was selected and i might faint!\ i felt so incompetent at the beginning competing against such ruthless competition.\n○ \did you hear?\ i asked them. \my painting was selected!\ they cheered loudly, especially given that the competition was so ruthless. i had felt so incompetent at the beginning.

read the sentence.\ni told them how surprised and excited i was to have my painting selected, especially since id felt so incompetent at the beginning and i knew the competition was so ruthless.\nwhich revision best uses dialogue to reveal more about the character?\n○ \it was such a big surprise.\ i told them. \im excited that my painting was selected!\ i had felt so incompetent at the beginning, feeling unqualified next to such ruthless competition.\n○ i told them truthfully that i was surprised to be chosen. the competition was ruthless, so very fierce. i felt so incompetent at the beginning. its really exciting to have my painting selected.\n○ \im in!\ i exclaimed, voice cracking with emotion. \my painting was selected and i might faint!\ i felt so incompetent at the beginning competing against such ruthless competition.\n○ \did you hear?\ i asked them. \my painting was selected!\ they cheered loudly, especially given that the competition was so ruthless. i had felt so incompetent at the beginning.

Answer

Brief Explanations:

  • Analyze each option for effective dialogue use.
  • Option 3 has vivid dialogue ("I'm in!" "My painting was selected and I might faint!") with emotional cues (voice cracking) that reveal character's excitement and surprise better than other options.

Answer:

Third option: “I’m in!” I exclaimed, voice cracking with emotion. “My painting was selected and I might faint!” I felt so incompetent at the beginning competing against such ruthless competition.