rearrange the sentence below to remove any wordy sections. do not change the sentences meaning. this thesis…
rearrange the sentence below to remove any wordy sections. do not change the sentences meaning. this thesis statement is based on disneys aladdin. your answer it is jasmine who treats her father disrespectfully by refusing to see his side of their arguments.
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Brief Explanations:
The original sentence is already concise and there are no wordy sections. The second - part sentence about Jasmine is a separate statement and not related to the first one about the thesis statement. Since we are only asked to work on the first sentence "This thesis statement is based on Disney's Aladdin.", no rearrangement is needed as it is clear and not wordy.
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This thesis statement is based on Disney's Aladdin.