review the paragraph about twinsburg, ohio, a...
review the paragraph about twinsburg, ohio, and the twins days festival. in the small town of twinsburg, ohio, two is always better than one. in 1819, identical twin brothers purchased the land and gave the town its name. in a fitting tribute to its founders, the town has evolved to become a modern day hotspot for twins. since 1976, twinsburg has hosted the annual twins days festival, the largest gathering in the world for twins and other multiple birth siblings. my best friend has a twin sister, but the two of them have never attended twins days. this festival, attended by thousands of twins each summer, features parades, athletic events, and competitions for the most - identical and least - identical twins. additionally, the festival hosts researchers from a range of fields. these scientists are eager to gather valuable data - via surveys, photos, and genetic testing - from twinsburgs enormous pool of two - of - a - kind visitors. why should the bolded sentence be removed? it provides information that is off topic. it provides information that is redundant. it provides unnecessary personal information.