8. revise the run - on sentence to form one o...
8. revise the run - on sentence to form one or more complete sentences. my older sister is an actor, she is an expert on makeup. checklist 1. my writing demonstrates a command of grammar, spelling, and punctuation. have a question or comment for your teacher?
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# Brief Explanations:
The original is a run - on sentence. It can be split into two independent sentences to correct the error.
# Answer:
My older sister is an actor. She is an expert on makeup.