revising a draft to strengthen connections\n(1) producers of reality shows are being smart, not unethical…

revising a draft to strengthen connections\n(1) producers of reality shows are being smart, not unethical, when they give their \actors\ scripts to follow. (2) if producers had to follow everyone around waiting for an exciting event to occur, they would never make their deadlines to produce the episodes. (3) therefore, scripted reality shows reflect efficient planning, not sheer deceit. (4) furthermore, the scripts do not change the fact that the shows are based on the real lives of the \actors.\ (5) for example, if a reality show were about an interior decorator, the producer would never give the decorator a script related to running a restaurant. (6) the producer would, of course, always create scripts that related to decorating.\nwhich revision would best improve the connections between ideas and the flow of the paragraph?\nadding a fact to improve the logic of sentence 2\nmoving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph\nadding a transitional phrase to sentence 4\nusing an analogy to describe a restaurant in sentence 5

revising a draft to strengthen connections\n(1) producers of reality shows are being smart, not unethical, when they give their \actors\ scripts to follow. (2) if producers had to follow everyone around waiting for an exciting event to occur, they would never make their deadlines to produce the episodes. (3) therefore, scripted reality shows reflect efficient planning, not sheer deceit. (4) furthermore, the scripts do not change the fact that the shows are based on the real lives of the \actors.\ (5) for example, if a reality show were about an interior decorator, the producer would never give the decorator a script related to running a restaurant. (6) the producer would, of course, always create scripts that related to decorating.\nwhich revision would best improve the connections between ideas and the flow of the paragraph?\nadding a fact to improve the logic of sentence 2\nmoving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph\nadding a transitional phrase to sentence 4\nusing an analogy to describe a restaurant in sentence 5

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Brief Explanations:

Adding a transitional phrase helps in smoothly connecting ideas and improving the flow of a paragraph. In this case, sentence 4 starts a new - related thought, and a transitional phrase would better link it to the previous ideas. Adding a fact to sentence 2 doesn't directly improve connections between ideas in the whole paragraph. Moving sentence 3 doesn't enhance the flow as much as adding a transitional phrase. Using an analogy in sentence 5 is not relevant to improving connections between the main ideas presented so far.

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adding a transitional phrase to sentence 4