4. how could the sentence below be improved with sensory details and precise language? \the pie was on the…

4. how could the sentence below be improved with sensory details and precise language? \the pie was on the table.\ the pie was placed on the wooden table, and people noticed it was there as they gathered around. the pie was on the table, sitting there as the room filled with the faint scent of dessert. the pie, with its golden - brown crust and the sweet aroma of cinnamon and apples, rested on the wooden table. the pie was on the table, and someone mentioned how it looked

4. how could the sentence below be improved with sensory details and precise language? \the pie was on the table.\ the pie was placed on the wooden table, and people noticed it was there as they gathered around. the pie was on the table, sitting there as the room filled with the faint scent of dessert. the pie, with its golden - brown crust and the sweet aroma of cinnamon and apples, rested on the wooden table. the pie was on the table, and someone mentioned how it looked

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