subject: save the whales! dear professor crest, i know you are really busy and everything, but i was hoping…

subject: save the whales! dear professor crest, i know you are really busy and everything, but i was hoping that you could spend more time thinking about how to save the whales. its up to us to speak up on their behalf. its really wrong that some amusement parks use these poor, defenseless animals for recreational purposes. this must be stopped, and youre the person to do it! ttyl, jules which revisions would make this e - mail more formal? check all that apply. removing the contractions removing the exclamation points removing the salutation removing the slang and casual speech removing the information about amusement parks

subject: save the whales! dear professor crest, i know you are really busy and everything, but i was hoping that you could spend more time thinking about how to save the whales. its up to us to speak up on their behalf. its really wrong that some amusement parks use these poor, defenseless animals for recreational purposes. this must be stopped, and youre the person to do it! ttyl, jules which revisions would make this e - mail more formal? check all that apply. removing the contractions removing the exclamation points removing the salutation removing the slang and casual speech removing the information about amusement parks

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Brief Explanations:

Contractions, exclamation points, slang, and casual speech like "TTYL" are informal. Salutation is standard in formal emails and information about amusement - parks is relevant.

Answer:

removing the contractions removing the exclamation points removing the slang and casual speech