Question

kids should do more writing write more since writing helps develop improtant skills abd gives kids experience that will help them in a careers. when you writing, you have to use youre imagination, which strengthening the mind. using youre imagination is an importrant skill. also, writing it gives kids experince they will need for doing jobs in the real world and increases career options which is the correct way to fix the first mistake in paragraph 1? add two commas after writing remove the extra words write more add a period after write more

Explanation:

The first mistake in the paragraph is the redundant phrase "write more" right after "do more writing"—this creates unnecessary repetition. The correct fix is to remove this extra, repetitive wording to make the sentence clear and concise.

Answer:

remove the extra words "write more"