Question

which sentence most needs to be revised because its description is too vague? we hiked two miles uphill in the blooming forest today. we sprinted back and forth in the stuffy high school gym. we had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there. we stretched and then slowly jogged once around the track.

Explanation:

To determine which sentence is too vague, we analyze each option:

• "We hiked two miles uphill in the blooming forest today." provides specific details (distance, direction, location, time).
• "We sprinted back and forth in the stuffy high school gym." gives details about the action, location, and environment.
• "We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there." is vague because it doesn't specify where "there" is or provide more context about the location or purpose.
• "We stretched and then slowly jogged once around the track." has clear details about the actions and location.

Answer:

C. We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.