Question

writing a narrative about overcoming a challenge instruction active adding description use the drop - down menus to choose the most descriptive and effective version of each sentence. i walked home in the rain. the freezing rain stung my skin as i briskly walked home from school. shawna was mad at me. shawna gave me a mean look, and i could tell she was angry at me. shawnas hostility toward me was revealed by her cold stare and crossed arms. shawna was so mad at me that she would not talk to me the rest of the day.

Explanation:

This option uses more vivid and descriptive language like "hostility", "cold stare" and "crossed arms" to convey the emotion compared to other options.

Answer:

Shawna's hostility toward me was revealed by her cold stare and crossed arms.