Question

multiple choice question
first, read the topic sentence. then, answer the question.
lots of physical traits can influence how others perceive ones ability to be a leader.
identify how the topic sentence could be improved.
○ the writer makes an announcement about what the paragraph will discuss, rather than just introducing the topic of the paragraph.
○ the example is an incomplete sentence.
○ the subject is too broad and needs to be focused so that it can be discussed in one paragraph.
○ the topic sentence is too narrow and needs to be revised so that it can be supported with examples.

Explanation:

The original topic sentence "Lots of physical traits can influence how others perceive one's ability to be a leader" is overly broad. A single paragraph cannot adequately cover all physical traits and their link to perceived leadership ability; narrowing the focus (e.g., specifying key traits like height, facial structure) would make the topic manageable for a single paragraph. The other options are incorrect: the sentence is a complete sentence, it does not make an announcement of the paragraph's discussion structure, and it is not too narrow.

Answer:

The subject is too broad and needs to be focused so that it can be discussed in one paragraph.