Question

narrative: revising
\jamin?\ said angie.
\what is it?\ asked jamin.
\it was terrible, jamin,\ said angie, \they were laughing like it was funny.\
angie was crying and she seemed upset.
choose the correct answer
how could we revise this part of the narrative to make it more descriptive?
remove \said\ from \said angie\
change \said angie\ to \cried angie\
remove the word \jamin\

Explanation:

Changing "said Angie" to "cried Angie" adds more emotion - indicating that Angie is upset while speaking, making the narrative more descriptive. Removing "said" makes the dialogue less clear, and removing "Jamin" takes away important context.

Answer:

change "said Angie" to "cried Angie"