Question

previous lessons (carets-, crossing out repetitive words, etc.) and punctuate correctly.
the worlds that turner and lizzie live in couldnt be more different. turner lives
in a town where he feels all eyes are on him. lizzie has the freedom to roam. she
can roam wherever she likes. turners life is a prison. lizzie does as she chooses.
turners father is the new minister. the family has some money, education, and
prestige. turner has little responsibilities. lizzie is an orphan. she lives with her
grandfather. she has to gather firewood. she has to dig clams for dinner.

Explanation:

Combined repetitive ideas, added subordinating conjunctions, removed redundant phrases, and adjusted punctuation to create cohesive, concise sentences.

Answer:

Turner and Lizzie live in worlds that couldn't be more different. Turner lives in a town where he feels all eyes are on him, his life a prison since his father, the new minister, has brought the family money, education, and prestige—leaving Turner with little responsibility. In contrast, Lizzie, an orphan living with her grandfather, has the freedom to roam wherever she likes, though she must gather firewood and dig clams for dinner.