Question

read the excerpt from amirs letter to an advertising company where he wants to work over the summer.
(1) your company has worked on some truly iconic campaigns over the past few years. (2) i have always been interested in advertising, and i would welcome the opportunity to learn more about the industry this summer.
which is the best revision of sentence 2?
i have always thought that i should work in advertising, and this seems like the perfect summer job for me.
i have always wanted to know more about the advertising industry, and i think this is the place for me this summer.
i have always been interested in advertising, and this summer, you could teach me a lot more.
no change

Explanation:

The goal is to choose a revision that is professional, aligns with Amir's goal of getting a summer job at the advertising company, and connects his interest to the specific company. The second option clearly links his longstanding interest in learning about advertising to the company as the ideal place to do so, which is more purposeful and professional than the other options. The first option shifts focus to "should work" which is less natural, the third is overly casual ("you could teach me"), and the original sentence is vague about tying the opportunity to the company specifically.

Answer:

I have always wanted to know more about the advertising industry, and I think this is the place for me this summer.