Question

read the sentence.
derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees when he was thirty-seven years old in 2011 at yankee stadium in the bronx.
which is the best way to revise this complex sentence?
in 2011, derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees at yankee stadium in the bronx. he was thirty-seven years old.
in 2011, derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees. at yankee stadium in the bronx, he was thirty-seven years old.
derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees when he was thirty-seven years old playing at yankee stadium. in the bronx.
derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit at age thirty-seven. in the bronx at yankee stadium in 2011.

Explanation:

The best revision organizes details logically: it leads with the year, then the core achievement (3,000th hit), the team, the location, and finally clarifies Jeter's age in a separate, clear sentence without misplaced modifiers or confusing structure. The first option avoids awkward phrasing and ensures all details are connected correctly.

Answer:

A. In 2011, Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees at Yankee Stadium in the Bronx. He was thirty-seven years old.