Question

1. w.11-12.4 how could the organization of the paragraph be improved?

a. move the last sentence to the beginning to start with a strong opinion.
b. add a topic sentence that clearly addresses the main idea before giving examples.
c. separate the paragraph into two for better pacing.
d. use a quote instead of examples for more credibility.

1. w.11-12.4 which change would make the style and tone more appropriate for a school or academic audience?

a. replace \people just need to be smart\ with \users must think carefully about their engagement.\
b. add more examples to make it relatable.
c. use contractions to make it sound more casual.
d. remove all mention of specific social media platforms.

Explanation:

For question 14: A clear topic sentence establishes the paragraph's main idea upfront, guiding readers before supporting examples, which is a standard way to improve paragraph organization.
For question 15: Academic writing requires formal, precise language. Replacing casual phrasing with formal, clear wording aligns with the tone expected for a school/academic audience. Adding examples doesn't address tone, casual contractions are inappropriate, and removing platform mentions isn't necessary for appropriateness.

Answer:

1. B. Add a topic sentence that clearly outlines the main idea before giving examples.
2. A. Replace "people just need to be smart" with "users must think carefully about their engagement."