Question

the writer is considering deleting sentence 7 (reproduced below) from the passage. kennedy’s transformation and display of sayings such as \higher the hair, closer to heaven\ celebrated the daily experiences of salon patrons, reinforcing the self - esteem of stylists and patrons alike and getting everyone talking. should the writer keep or delete the sentence? a keep it, because it strengthens the writer’s credibility by including a quote that is likely familiar to the audience. b keep it, because it provides commentary that helps explain how the example of kennedys artwork is significant in relation to the passage’s overall argument. c delete it, because it contains details about hairdressing that are not relevant to the paragraph’s discussion of art and community.

Explanation:

The sentence connects Kennedy's work (framed as art tied to salon culture) to the passage's likely focus on art and community: it explains how the artwork celebrates salon experiences, builds shared self-esteem, and fosters conversation, which directly supports an argument linking art to community bonds. Option A is incorrect because the quote does not boost credibility; it illustrates the work's theme. Option C is incorrect because the hairdressing details are relevant to the salon community and art discussion.

Answer:

B. Keep it, because it provides commentary that helps explain how the example of Kennedy's artwork is significant in relation to the passage's overall argument.