Question

1. how could the author revise the sentence below to improve clarity with more precise adjectives? \the sky was colorful.\ \the sky was bright and colorful.\ \the sky was colorful and nice.\ \the sky was kind of colorful.\ \the sky was vibrant with fiery oranges and purples.\

Explanation:

The original sentence "The sky was colorful" is vague. The option "The sky was vibrant with fiery oranges and purples" uses more precise adjectives like "vibrant", "fiery" and also specifies the colors "oranges and purples" to make the description clearer. The other options either add non - specific adjectives ("bright", "nice") or make the description less clear ("kind of colorful").

Answer:

"The sky was vibrant with fiery oranges and purples."