Question

1. revise the advertisement cool off with freddies fruit smoothie. choose black raspberry, strawberry, or lemon - lime. you may wish to add a dollop of whipped cream for even more enjoyment. which is the best way to revise this advertisement? add descriptive modifiers use passive verbs clean up the grammatical errors combine the sentences using parallel structure

Explanation:

The original advertisement is functional but lacks engaging, sensory details that would make it more appealing to consumers. Adding descriptive modifiers (e.g., "creamy Freddie's Fruit Smoothie," "juicy black raspberry," "fluffy whipped cream") would make the ad more vivid and persuasive, which is the most effective revision for an advertisement. The original text has no grammatical errors, passive voice would make it less direct, and parallel structure is not a priority here over descriptive appeal.

Answer:

A. add descriptive modifiers