Question

below is an outline of an essay about technologys effect on education.

• introduction
• thesis statement: while technology improves learning by offering many resources and interactive tools, it also creates challenges, requiring careful management in education.
• body paragraphs
• main point 1: enhancement to the learning experience
• subpoint a: access to online resources
• subpoint b: interactive learning tools
• main point 2: challenges of technology in education
• subpoint a: distraction from learning
• subpoint b: digital divide among students

what improvement is needed for the outline?

• incorporate subpoints on how technology can support personalized learning.
• provide additional subpoints about the potential risks of technology use.
• come up with another main point about managing technology in education.
• provide more subpoints discussing the benefits of technology for teachers

Explanation:

The thesis statement notes that technology has benefits and creates challenges requiring careful management in education. The current outline covers benefits and challenges but lacks a main point focused on the "careful management" aspect mentioned in the thesis. The other options add more details to existing benefit/challenge categories, but the key gap is addressing the management requirement from the thesis.

Answer:

Come up with another main point about managing technology in education.